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Haunting, it's inside me.
Destroying, it's living.
With sharp teeth, it devours.

Strong, I rise up against it.
The deal is my soul or suffering.

The first strike is mine, but from there it's down hill.
It pushes me to the edge of insanity.
Tipping on the balance, I manage to push back.
But I never win, I never manage to land more than two blows before it strikes again.

With chains, this inner Demon of mine, binds my heart and mind.
Separated, they fight me.

Against myself,
How do I win?
I don't know about this one...I think it sucks...
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:iconjunete:
I don't think it sucks at all; it beautifully and simply paints a picture of inner conflict.
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greenolive5557 Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much~ :hug:
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:iconandroid3000:
Well done.
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greenolive5557 Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^ ^ :hug:
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Fallen-Warrior1023 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
actually i rather like this because it describes the conflicts that everyone has with their inner demons rather well, or at least from my experience. In these kinds of fights, winning is never easy, for there is not a more dangerous enemy to fight than ourselves. But winning is possible, the key is that no matter what happens, no matter how hard you are hit, force yourself to get back up for another round, never let the thought of surrender/giving up cross your mind.
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greenolive5557 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thanks! That's realy poetic too~ I love that, but it's so true.
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Fallen-Warrior1023 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
np. that just really described how i felt up until about five or so months ago, so it kind of struck a chord with me.
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greenolive5557 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm glad people can relate~ But, at the same time, I do wish and hope that you get better, so that you can be truely happy ^ ^ :hug:
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Fallen-Warrior1023 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh i have, the past four months have been the happiest that ive had in a long time, and i intend to stay happy no matter what may happen. :)
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greenolive5557 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's great!! :D
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