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Rip out my heart;
You hold it in your hand.

By letting you hold onto it,
I'm showing trust, but what do you do?

You tear it up and throw the pieces on the ground.
You spit on it and grind it into the dust with your heel
And walk away.

And I'm left there,
Alone.

Bleeding and crying;
Alone.
Some feelings I have right now...
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Minotaurini Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs* sometimes life is like a horribly frightening and desperate tale of sorrow and rejection. You look around at everyone laughing and smiling and it makes you feel like you're the star of some sick comedy nobody likes. Thats how I feel at least. Hang in there hun... Your moods sound savage and very powerful. I love the brevity of this poem its very blunt yet sharp at the same time. As emotional as it gets.. definitely the kind of writing i like to read.
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greenolive5557 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*hug* Thank you ^ ^
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